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Pleasing Her (revised)

My lips kiss yours, softly, tenderly
My body pressing against yours
Awakening our hearts to love's splendour
We explore each others body slowly

Each touch, each kiss intensifies our emotions
Enveloped within the pleasures our love does bestow
These feelings we can no longer conceal
Our lips locked in a heated embrace

As world outside this room slowly melts away
Your hand gently touching my face,
As down your body my hands do stray
Fingers touching warm flesh, tracing every curve

The heat from our bodies enticing us, demanding
Our passion awakening every nerve
Just from the tenderness of each others touch
Touching the sensitive petals of your flower

Moaning so softly you beg me not to stop
Your hand gently touching my erect tower
Demanding to feel me inside you, thrusting nonstop.
Telling you this moment is for your pleasure

My fingers slide though your gates of paradise
You feel the sensations so intense
Beyond all known measure
Knowing you have long passed stopping

Your body quivering with sensual emotions
Our kisses growing more passionate, stronger
As your body displays you supreme pleasure
In raptures as you try to prolong your climax

Moaning wildly, passionately, your head tilting back
Your climax floods you, roaring like a tidal wave
My fingers, my lips continue their loving attack
Giving you the pleasure that your body does crave

Kissing softly as we hold each other so tight
Knowing the fires of passion in your heart I did ignite
This is more than an act of lust that we shared
It is my way of showing you my love, how much I care


You lay languid in all your naked and divine beauty
I smile, knowing that I give you such pleasure

Author notes

To the woman who I love so much. And also I'd like to thank RikkiRae for helping me revise this poem. I truly appreciate it.

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  • RikkiRae silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    I Like it!!!! Far superior to your earlier effort.
    Now I have a suggestion
    Go to the shop and buy some nice paper, maybe a paper that looks like parchment together with a nice frame to put it in. If you don't have a font (typeface) suitable, then download a nice elegant cursive font and use it to print out the poem or another if you think it more suitable. put it in the frame and it will make a nice Christmas present for your girlfriend. I am sure she will love it because it is something actually created by you for her!!

    Just an Idea!!