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The Dark Light

A moon so dark its bright,
Covered in a pal white light,
Illuminating all of night,
Everything possible in sight.

A strenuous glow,
That just seems to flow,
From every edifice,
Everything so nice.

Darkness so bright,
Light is in flight,
Finality this night,
Floating on winds of war,
Like a kite.

Avarice Avinga Naruse,
The world takes so much abuse,
Every human so obtuse,
Everyone is in a noose.

Try thrice humanity for survival,
Fight back nights dark revival,
Standing strong for lights arrival,
Hoping its not to derival.

Flowing like water,
Darkness from light,
World on brinks edge totter,
Push back with all our might,
Only to fall once more and again,
Deep into the pit of despair and sin.

A contest entry

Ahhhh...what is life but a simple sit on the swing of ignorance?

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  • cheeku
    November 29, 2008

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    Very well done, some of the parts in this poem were a bit tricky to understand, but that leaves the reader thinking about your poem. Great job, thank you so much for your entry!!! =]