Time begins
A spiral of colours energy
Development of planets
Stars land and water
Animals fish birds
Mammal and finally man
Man begins
Wheels of turning history
Fire clubs and metal swords
the Village the city and country broad
An eternal rape of nature
And then the gun begins
The Gun and the Bullet
Destroying the evolution
Man made revolution
Burning the souls of those who touch
Gun the bank of death
Bullet the currency of finality.
any one agree disagree with the mesage?
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I agree with ya, and not just coz I'm your sister but because you're a totally awesome poet with a fantasmical brain.
Ohkay, enuf of the fancy lingo, this is actually a really deep poem and I really got the message you were trying to put across. You've touched on some really good points and some of the language was really brilliant.
You're gonna rock your Philosophy classes this year bro!!
Loved the rhythm of the last stanza, it flowed really well.
Loves!!
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yes this was definately a very deep piece here may i add you really did a very great awesome job with this here piece thanks for sharing
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