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Life Week Has Come Alive

Distraction seems to be the nature form of life
Many are addicted to it on the move every day
My head is full of jelly and rocks that dance to there  own tune
My stable rock has fled this earth
Living my universal completely shatter out of control
Routine of life blow up in my face
Now I enter the void of the world
Looking for the master wizard to tell me my purpose
His words spoke to  me, do not look for it
When you need it, a teacher will come

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  • WolfHeart
    November 26, 2008

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    I love what you have to say here. I can see a blossoming and new hope. It's good to hear this positive side emerging.
    You can become your own wizard! One step after another is what you need now. Feel better my darling daughter, you are precious to me.


  • Candyknife gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    whoa

    very nice i liked this a lot
    intricate yet mindless and purpose of hope met with truth
    you do have a few typos, so you might want to re-edit