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My Medusa

faces carved in stone

carved visions of grey

you’re so covered in moss, my pretty

not this potters clay

 

there’s no room for my renditions

now these memories are mine alone

in a rush these blades are dulling

from chisling my own faces of stone

 

you won’t remember it as i do

that your truth was never mine

the giver truely owns what’s given

these statues only remind

 

you couldn’t take the visage, because it wasn’t mine to give

you couldn’t slay it, that you might live

it moved in you the way it moves through me

and as the wind of it rushed around us

i shed the tear you refused to see

 

look away...

rend your eyes and look away

with my heart that breaks with sympathy

as i've watched you fade to grey....

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 30, 2008

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    This has incredible potential. The reader is drawn to that place within and relates. There are some erros and perhaps some spacing might help it make it flow a little bette for the reader. Thank you so much for entering this poem.