I thought you could have been the one
Yes "the one"
"That" one
But you weren't the one
Just someone
Another one, of the people passing through my life
I thought I could have loved you
Loved true
Only you
But you couldn't stay through
So off you flew
Like you always do
But I never stopped loving you
I thought that I could push through
All the things that you do
I thought I could stay true
But all the things we were used to
Begain to fade away
I thought that I could stay the course
Hold my head high
Show no remorse
But that's a lie
I want to cry
"Oh why did I have to say no?"
A contest entry
- supermassive black hole by JinSays.
629 points, ended December 8, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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ohmg.
this is exactly it.
right here, this poem is incredible, seemingly happy, but with that bite of absolute fuckyou pain I was looking for. Im not feeling sorry for myself, just wanna come down for the everdraining bullshit perpetuated by this one individual.
I love it.
I wish you all the best in this contest.
Love
jin
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such a sweet poem. thats all i will say for simplicity purposes. really sweet. {like the rhyming}
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Sweet, sweetie. Nice poem.
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