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Special Place

Since I am poor my paradise lives in my mind

First it would have no phones, just pure plain quite silence
Where one could reflect life themes playing out in our lives
My dogs running free and  having fun

Now worries about tomorrow just enjoying this one moment
That moment will not return ever no one hears it past away
from our lives

Take a good look at what we take for granted
Pour our inner anger into a book then start over
In this place of perfect love and wisdom

I would recharge my batteries of
Breathe in perfect peace and let out all of the bad

I think we make our Paradise a special place for a person

It helps us cope with life rough waves of life
Safe place to forgive our mistakes
Let them go freely on their way

A candle is a must with a smoothing scent vanial
Hot tea or coffee and a place of quit then I am off
into another world.

Only I embrace the fresh flowers all around
It has a small bridge over it to see the color gold fish
Then I lay out in the sun feeling the healing rays of love

There are times I do not solve my answers
It does help me to cope with until the ideal appears it self
I feel more positive thoughts and I feel ten pounds lighter

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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    Well said dear poet, I relate to this too and was lucky to make it come true
    Whish you too can make your Paradise come true
    Keep dreaming, dreams come true believe me


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    Wow! I live in my mind as well coz the world hurts me so bad. This is beautiful. Let us run free with our dogs! I also love flowers, they are so incredible. Good luck in the contest