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When It's Not Ok

When it's not ok
My lies begin to form
The deception is my face
The smile is my mask
I stand alone
The monster dwelling
Emptiness comes
A longing growing
Wounds get deeper
Scars now bleed
The clock is ticking
Survival leaves
My path begins
My trail is lost
I'm running and
I'm crawling
I'm down and on my knees
My pace has quickened
My walking slowed
I'm on the ground
I've hit the floor
I've reached my point
I've crossed the line

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