Tangled like ribbons
our souls are entwined
strands of love so gentle
honest and kind
hold us together in
a tender embrace
In a union as beautiful
as delicate lace
Author notes
May add more...tired now 
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This is pretty, so glad to read it.
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Aw laced love how wonderful hun
Beautifully creative piece
May the love continue to shine
Best wishes
Julie
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Thank you Julie
always a pleasure to have you comment.
~sugar~
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Pretty.
Very romantic words, sis. Short & to the point. Good one.
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Thanks bro..I was doodling, I liked it so I thought I would post it
I may add more, don't know yet.
Always appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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I love it hon! You did a wonderful job on this and I really don't think you need to add any more to this
Great one here hon!
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Appreciate you reading hon...just doodling, and liked it.
~sugar~
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Hi sug, just checking out your page and came across this delightful read, me personally I would leave it has it is, it is a beautiful read and says so much as it stands.
All the best
Emma
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Thanks hon reading this, I must admit I do like it like this, short and simple.
Who knows I may add to it at a later date.
~sugar~
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