You can smoke
Drink
Or even do drugs
But you must know
I love you
I always have
And i always will
Love you
I miss who you used to be
You know
Before your mom died
Before everyone cried
Before you broke down
Before you put up your shield
I know you miss her
But doing this to yourself
Doesn't help
But if this what makes you happy
I just want you to know
I love you
I always have loved you
And i always will love you
No matter what you do
You can smoke
Drink
Or even do drugs
I may miss who you used to be
I may wish you were you again
But ill always love you
Always
As in forever
I love you Dad
I miss you Daddy
Author notes
I really do miss my daddy, he hasn't been the same since my grandma died. He does do those things but ill always love him no matter what he does, even if you chooses to move away and never see me again. I'll always picture him the way he was before he put up his wall. I miss my fun loving wonderful daddy. But i will always love my drunken fool i call a dad.
Could you feel the emotions of the poem? What did you think?
Comments
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i miss my dad!!! ;'(
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This hit hard. My heart goes out to you and I'll be here if you need me. I know what it's like to watch someone you love fall apart and become someone else because of the pain. I completely agree with Janice's advice. I think it might be better in your own handwriting than printed out, even if you think your handwriting sucks. It may seem old-fashioned, but there's just something a little more personal when you actually took the time and effort to write it by hand. Emotion can be seen even more clearly if you just look at the handwriting that goes along with it. (or at least I think so) I wish you all the best and pray for hope in you and your entire family's future. with love,
~nymph -
I know and understand your pain.
You know your can help you Dad by leaving
this poem lying somewhere that he is bound to
see it and pick it up. It could be just the very thing to snap him out of this and get him to see how
much he is hurting you. Just print it out or
write it out and leave it lying around in a place you know he will find it and pick it up. You wrote it from the heart and it would take a really cold hearted person not to melt after reading it.
Make sure you include the authors notes when
you write it out.Much love and hugs.
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