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used.

My body fills with
this all too familar emotion.
I feel it so often,
it seems as if
it never even leaves.

This emotion I know so well.
this feeling of being used.
wanted only for that moment
the moment that is right for him.

At first it feels great,
to have someone want you
to have someone care about you
or at least pretend to,
to feel needed, and that
is all you really want to feel.

Then the unbearable part kicks in
you're reminded he was only using you
he only wanted to borrow
your body for a moment.
to get what he wants.

Why does  the feeling of being wanted
it only lasts for an instant
when it is the best part,
it sticks around just long enough
to give you just enough hope
to hurt worse then before.


Yet I knew that it
was bound to happen
so if I knew why
does it hurt this much?

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  • albinoblacksheep720
    November 26, 2008

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    Wow

    I been through it too and so havs myfriend. I love it. I can relate to it. The flow, emotion wonderfdul. I really like it. You I am going to favorite later. Love it. Great job good luck