Purify me,
bring to me
all the goodness
you bestow
purify me
wash me in your love
and cleans my soul
breath into me
the breath of life
and fill this heart
to overflow
for you are the purest
form of beauty
that I know
Purify me
Author notes
Once again I was a moment too late to submit for a contest, the first 10 words of this poem were inspired by a picture prompt contest.
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Pure
You write with such positivity and heart.
I can see someone nealt within a beautiful enchated stream, begging the sun to radiate its warmth and beauty throughout her being.
absolutely magical.
Thank you so much for your comment on my "shameless promotion" poem and thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem!
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Deprived
Thank you so much for your warm comments.
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This is my winner
This is purity itself. Nice write
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TC
Thank you for your wonderful comments. The first 10 words of this were inspired by a crystal clear droplet of water, and since I didnt make the contest deadline, I finished it and it took on a whole different meaning. I do like the way this turned out.
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Purification
Good job here... cleanse the senses!
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tombruize
thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it.
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The beauty of this needs no picture.
Well done.
Buddy
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PT
AWWW..thank you for your sweet wonderful comment
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how cleansing pure love can be, washing away all the ugliness that seeks to creep in when it is absent. a lovely poem you share here. nicely done.
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Thank you kind sir, your words of praise are cherished. I so appreciate your taking the time to read and comment.
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Wonderful poem so romantic. It surely shows your heart and beauty. Excellent job
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Michael
would you believe it is about a drop of water? well atleast the first 10 words were...thank you, you are sweet and wonderful
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How stunningly beautiful!! I am so glad I came to see. This poem is a materpiece and can bless many.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment,
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Very nice
I love the words and the emotions in this write, it is heartfelt and sincere very nice job! -
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thank you so very much!
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wow
whata an earnest tribute to the pure one.Whoever that might be..but it made such a greats ense that one can always identify such souls and beseech them.Thanks for sharing.I loved these lines:breath into me
the breath of life
and fill this heart
to overflow
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sgking123
Thank you for your thoughtful comment, as in the authors notes the first 10 words were for a picture prompt which was a pure drop of water splashing back up and this piece, pretty much wrote itself once i got past the first 10 words. As always your thoughtfulness and support are always appreciated.
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my first and last impression is one of simplicity and naked beauty. "Purify me," thats what we all look for...loved it...Dan
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Dan
thank you very much.
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Excellent
This is so very simple yet I can see allot of though behind the poetry and with wisdom we find our beliefs! A true poet and gifted to be sure.Flows like a river and word count is great! Has the winner sticker on it here good job poet friend ! Thanks For Sharing it with me! Really enjoyed it allot. mel. -
Excellent
This is so sweet and a wonderful poem looks like a winner all the way to me. Can't even imagine changing one single word of it. LovelyGood Luck In The Contests. mel.
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thanks Mel, the picture prompt was a drop of water, coming up from a crystal clear pond, it was pure... thanks for taking the time to read and comment
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Nice write
i liked it
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this is a lovely gentle work with an almost spiritual feel to it, and a defining grace, seriously nice write
thanks
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Beautiful, Patty. I love the flow of it. It is sweet and romantic. It makes me feel happy and warm inside.
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How beautiful ! This is short and very powerful. I love it.
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Janice
Thankyou so very much dear for your warm comments.
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well
A bath of love sounds appropriate dear poet. The prurity of true love. Such a beautiful thought you present.
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Bob
oooh a warm bath with a lover does sound inviting doesn't it, thank you for stopping by and reading my friend, your thoughtfulness is always welcome here
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I thought you were already pure
...cool write
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Vito
shhh don't tell anyone you'll blow my cover thank you
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Well, I am so glad you post these "contest-less" works -- they are so precise and concise -- with the simplest of words you pull us into your obsession/love with this beautiful person(?).. and leave us to insert our own interpretive details... a wonderful work.
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hawkeslake
you always have such warm and heartfelt comments about my work. I cant thank you enough, blessings, Patty
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