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your fire

extinguish me between your fingers
put me out.
                    switch me off.

    i don't want to be your fire
        if all i do is burn.


charred skin and
  smoke in your eyes -
    a lasting impression.


drown me in a silent sleep.

A contest entry

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  • Heart Sutra
    December 1, 2008

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    This is subtle and to the point in an abstract way. It has a particular charm to it. Thank you for sharing your work with the contest.