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Waves in Ecstasy



Diving in so deep

swimming in true ecstasy

your waves fill my soul.

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  • Draig aine gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    shivers

    what a write


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    very nice i liked this you really did a very great excellent job with this piece here good luck in the contest