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~ Aeolian-Peace! ~

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http://allpoetry.com/contest/2428431

A contest entry

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  • maralisa silver member
    November 26, 2008
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    wonderful good luck inthe contest maralisa


  • daviscth silver member
    November 25, 2008
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    I really like these two words. Thanks so much for taking time to post for my contest.