I'm addicted to pleasure, for what could I say?
What could these comforts be taking away?
My health and my ego? My sanity's sway?
What's wrong with dreaming in this disarray?
Author notes
For those who live everyday in a drug-induced haze.
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Thought I would check out a few things. I wish I could say this was wrong and I do not like it. Eh, if wishes were horses....
Very succinct, and funny, to boot.
Thank you for sharing.
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I must say, I have learned many new words from conversing with you.
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I live to inspire.
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4 lines of perfection Jim!
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*giggles at the comment beneath her*
I have my own, natural haze, no drugs needed!
And I adore this. Fantastic write. I'm very impressed by your vocabulary and flow. Splendid. 
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We should hope for salvation by grovelling before Jesus. But this is a nice poem I think. I shall pray for you.
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sounds like my life about one third of the time, and I never do drugs! Bipolar really sucks. Anyways, this was a well written poem. You did a good job with it, and it's short, I like short. Anyways I am rambeling arn't I? Oh well, anyways, just decided to check out your poetry.
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i think we all might be addicted to pleasure.
i know i am.
sort and simple with a good point.
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