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never mind---

Kindly keep not  a red tag
your service  however is deemed  as simply  extra ordinary
your sentiments are valid and convincing to thinking souls

When our eyes are shamefully  sticking  on idiotic screens hours together
and wasting time forgetting , human spirit and their priceless values
why cant I shower some drops of brotherhood to a needed heart
taking time to scribble poems to win her solace /on time?

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  • Black Rayne
    November 26, 2008
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    Thank you and good luck