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at one shot ----------------

Mince not words
try not to convince  the world

Keep a straight dip
into the valleys of wisdom
wince , to gain the paths  of knowledge
and bet a  chance to win the hearts ,at one shot

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Quickie - Word Prompt - Wince

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  • ml12
    November 27, 2008

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    It was brief but I liked it. I liked the tone and the way that you have presented your ideas. Thanks for entering the contest