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My World Exploded

She took me gently
Into her marvelous mouth deep
And my world exploded!

Author notes

Some things are worth remembering!

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  • DolceVito gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    A haiku with far-reaching implications...We all remember well those BJ moments.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    i remeber your so freakish and erotic hot ass i love this it made me warm all over good luck to you in the contest


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 25, 2008

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    Indeed they are! lol
    Great work with this prompt
    and good luck to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826