Inside my mind the darkness
tries smothering the light
a war is raging deep within
a never ending fight.
Tears so fresh spring from my eyes
at the screaming in my brain
voices whisper in my ears driving me insane
my mind inside is spliting
my thoughts are not quite sane
madness runs amuck through out my troubled brain
causing inner torment and excruciating pain.
Sometimes my thoughts seem so clear
sometimes it seems so tame
then the darkness devours the light
there is no turning back
my brain has finally fractured I distintly heard a crack.
A contest entry
- Insanity by Insane-Joe.
700 points, ended December 2, 2008, 26 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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lol, I love the ending on this one too. Finely detailed and worded.
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WOW!!!
Out of all of the entries yours acctually fallowed my quote...brilliant poem!!!
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You certainly have a good form here, and you delve completely into the mood of insanity...thoroughly..Good luck in the contest!
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