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Promise that I'm your baby?

Photographs of you hanging on the walls
My perfect little angel, suspended in time,
The moment you asked me to be yours
My perfect little angel, suspended in my mind.

Maybe someone out there heard my prayers,
Maybe someone thought they'd wipe away my tears,
After all this time,
Baby, you're finally mine!
And I could ask for nothing more.

Every moment dying to be in your arm's,
The beat of my heart ringing out like alarms,
Every time you walk by.

Baby, promise to be with me forever,
And never,
Never let me go.

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Happy one month baby!!!!
In a few hours anyway.... =)

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  • alexandra.
    November 26, 2008

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    Counting the days, one thing. Counting the hours, em, you SURE you not ocd?
    Actually, I think it's dead sweet. You deserve each other.


    It's a brilliant piece, duh, you wrote it.
    Not much I else I can say, I heart all your writes

    loveyou.
    xxx.


  • samantha jean
    November 25, 2008

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    "Baby, promise to be with me forever,
    And never,
    Never let me go." - I love the ending. So simple and sweet.

    Cute write. Happy one month.