lips smack teasingly
tongue laps honeyed delight
body writhes sated
Author notes
BG Thanks to my AP sis
sweet & sensual Piffers
Thank you hon
A contest entry
- Make Me Clinch My Face With A Deeply Sensual Haiku by theredcatjazzoflove.
800 points, ended November 30, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED- FROM A SWEET AND SENSUAL LADY!
Short, sweet, and sensually delightful! I believe that this is the first time that i've read a Haiku that I felt all the way down to me willy - which made me want to give it a pull, too - which is my naughty way of saying this one was "AS GOOD AS GOLD TO ME"
HE! HE!
And PIFF'S background fits this hot piece (pun intended) perfectly, too.
Peace & Love to the both of you.
Earl.
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LOL!!! Glad you enjoyed this sweetie, you're always naughty, wouldn't want you any other way
A pleasure as always to have you read and comment.
Love you Chelle xxx
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I feel like releasing myself...
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Appreciate you reading
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Whoa, one HOT write sug, makes you go DAMN!
Well done with the challenge
All the best with the contest
Emma
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I have my moments LOL!! Thanks for your fab comment hon.
~sugar~
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damn! makes me hate the fact i ask for a haiku you still have your erotic flames i see
good luck babe in the contest 
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Cheers hon..still got it Just on the back burner.
Thank you for you fab comment sweetie
~sugar~
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Oooh I love how you wrote this one!
Nothing like ending a passionate night
sated. I love your background here, very
hot and sensual! All the best to you with
this entry my friend and good luck!
Jeremy0826
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Thank you Jeremy for reading and commenting
Always a pleasure, valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Short & to the point.
Good one, sis.
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Thanks bro, glad you enjoyed
~sugar~
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Oh how saucy is this haiku
brilliantly penned my sensual writing friend
Lustful ....
Best wishes always
Julie x
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Thanks hon..
A pleasure to have you read
Valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Like your sensual haiku!
Very oral and fun!
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Thank you hon
Thanks for the count...damn, I must learn how to count LMAO!
A pleasure as always
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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Hee Hee!!! I love this one Good luck in the contest hon
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I just had to have a go Thank you hon for reading and commenting.
Always a pleasure. ~sugar~
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