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Breathless chills

Bladed infusions,
crush slumber,
depths of thought,
astray casting down,
disharmony in our,
frame of mind,
etching abrasions,
with broken wounds.

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No 4- Petals of silence

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    AW how sad is this one yet spoken is such a way that I felt that pain too
    Thank you my special friend
    Best wishes to you
    Julie x


  • thejollytinker
    December 2, 2008

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    Light on words, heavy on meaning. That's so hard to fit all the required words in using as few as you did- great!


  • Desire gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Oh My Word~

    This is a Powerful piece and when I opened it up~ I could feel the energy just grab~
    Love the reference to *etching abrasions*
    and Your take on the prompt
    Wow~
    and the border reaches out with salted fingers
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Nice take on the prompt hunni! Love the intensity of this. Those last two lines are fab, pull it together well. Good luck in the contest


  • penman gold member
    December 2, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. Best of luck in the contest.

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