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falling away
from all that was there
you think that love survives it all
what a foolish thought

remembrance follows my every step
it's all that I can think of
figure it out
I LOVE YOU

but that wasn't enough was it?
this mistake proved too much for you
too much for our love

apologies mean nothing
not this time
walking down those halls
the empty embrace that no longer lives

it's all I can think of
just your hug
it's all I want
nothing else
but your hug again...

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