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Oh Lover Mine

how dare you stand there
while your eyes unwrap my inner lining
tearing it to shreds unremedied

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    this was cool and nice you really did a great job challenging the others with this good luck to you in the show down hon