Maybe you should stop asking
Don't care about what I'll do.
Honestly, darling, can't you see it?
All I care about is you.
So maybe we're a bit different
Who cares about the people who stare?
No matter what happens, I'm willing to make it,
Only as long as you're there.
So be whoever you want to be,
Do whatever you want to do.
So long as you'll have me,
I'll still have you.
[Falling in Love is Falling in Wrong anyway...]
Author notes
SOOOOOO... a bit random, that I gotta admit.
And I can't even explain the brackets...it's one of those random things I made up over summer vacation but didn't know how to use in a poem... so yea, I decided to put it in this one. Not really quite sure if it makes sense... oh well.
Constructive(or just plain old) comments would be nice. Thanks!!
Read. Review. Enjoy.
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I couldn't help myself but look.
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I Really liek this peice,
explains kinda the reality why some lovers end up "not-lovers"
and the explanation of of how a lover feels.
DId you understand anything I said?
Probably not.
That's why I usually don't say anything
Just know that I like it!
(I can't really put anything into words.)
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this is the kind of poem that carries a lot with it, more then just words, my friend, keep it flowing
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-is about to be shot with my next words- IS IT FOR JENNA!? CAUSE ZOMG YOU GUYS WOULD BE SO CUTE TOGETHER! STOP BEING ASEXUAL AND GO LESBIAN! DO EEEEEEEEEET! -shot-
and now for my actual comment, it's so cute! i adored it. it's like...sad and touching at the same time. great write!
and now i'm just doing extra "enters" for points....mwahahaha. ok, i'll give you three clappy things in exchange for letting me waste your comment space. xD
but no, srsly, great poem. xDDDDD
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I've only got one response
I AM /NOT/ ASEXUAL!!!
Lol, just thought I'd make that clear. And seriously, you really just want me and Jenna together, eh? No other pairings to make up? **laughs** -
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1)if you ever come out as a lesbian/bisexual, it's bound to happen eventually anyways if it hasn't already.
2)you guys srsly just compliment each other well, it's adorable. (sometimes adorable enough to make me gag -cough-)
3)you would just look cute together too! skipping down the hill, holding hands.....i can see it now! b'awwwwwwwww! -smile-
4)you're not asexual, so you must be sexually into something. and since you're neither denying that i'm right, nor admitting that i am, it means i am. xD
think about it. for srs. -
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lol, that comment was cute. Kinda made me smile.
And I've technically never denied my sexuality. I mean, seriously, I'm not lying about it, but if no one's askin, then I'm not saying anything. Especially since its not like I've ever had a bf or gf... so yea. Everyone just assumes that I'm straight...or in some cases they just assume i'm lesbian, and since I technically have no proof to deny anyones case, I just don't bother. If someone just comes out and /asks/ me, then I'll say it(or maybe I'll keep them guessing, for all I know; watching this is a bit entertaining). But no one ever does, because everyone just assumes.
Besides, basically every relationship I've witnessed ends out pretty shittingly, so I don't think I wanna risk it. I ain't risking any friendships, y'know?
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cute? it was a srs thought! for srs!
-flail- i've asked you what your sexuality is! and you always shrug! so i say things, and you just say "i don't know!" so people assume because you don't even know.....=( so if i ask now, what are you, will you answer? (let's try it) "what are you?"
relationships only end shittingly because one person gets hurt. all is fair in love and war, and we all have to get hurt eventually. you'll never know if you don't take the chance, and you may find you'll regret not taking the chance sooner if you ever do. very very VERY few people ever find their life-long partner in high school, or even college. but we start looking there anyways because it helps us figure out what our type is to begin with. i hate those people that have never dated anyone and think they know what their type is. you need to live a little. getting hurt is what shapes and forms people into what they are. if you never get hurt, you never change. and as much as we don't like it, change is a part of life. it happens for a reason, and we can't stop it. so you know what they say, if you can't beat them, join them! so why not just...go with it? you may not gain anything, but you got nothing to lose. it's like betting. you never know what's going to happen until you try and place your bet. get back into the game, whether it involves stealing jenna away or anyone else! you have a plethora of chances, so take them. and i know plenty of exes that are friends, hell, i'm friends with most of my exes! relationships don't always ruin a friendship unless you let it. jsyk.
and i love how they're longer than your poem too. lol and how now it's getting all deep and philisophical. someone else is going to read your poem and go down to comment and see all this and be like "wtf?" lol <3
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Good job hunny, this is powerful. Really creative, emotion is pouring from it. And yep, it is random, but it is a good random.
Gwen
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