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a so same seasame of a siamese twin
two kinds of kin

the misteries of pleases
if this symmetry
is of side, play down this isle of 2 sides
one lane to get down by

a so lot, fin' space - a bride in view,
but where's the groom?
shall we ask her his whereabouts or shall we shout out 'get a room'
- pending on the request of single or double

a two way conversation goes slightly down a hole,
when two spotlights collide
there evolves one strong enough to fight down two weaker ones

and solo, you may sing,
but not know - you may be becoming duet
where's the wherever serve, in a tennis couplet

rack-out, the shutter... balls to it,
shuttle-cock, rocket off, where's the hit

hit down the times two,
I'm glad it's just me and you

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  • Rhythm Child
    November 27, 2008

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    loved the opening lines, i really really loved this poem
    i read it 3 times
    which is a rarity ! lol


  • theredcatjazzoflove
    November 26, 2008

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    this was a cool read hon just keep penning and people like m ewill keep reading this was a pleasure thanks for sharing