Hard, driven as drill
deeply penetrates to feel
a nectar release..
A contest entry
- Make Me Clinch My Face With A Deeply Sensual Haiku by theredcatjazzoflove.
800 points, ended November 30, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is very short but to the point and sweet
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short & straight to the point.... the release of ones nectar very nice mmmmm
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Yihaw
One must be careful at what one plunges into it could be deadly hahaha
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Hmmmmmmmmmm oh yeah, just a few words expressed a deepth of amazing pleasure. Well said.
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Hmmm
can feel the ppower and the release
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I thought it was about getting it on! Your way with words will amaze the ladies, swangrnv.
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a very eroti-ku, who wouldn't take a plunge...this page is going to be flooded with sweet release.
Anna Lee
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you drilled me with these words they are lit up like fire crackers honey
this was smoking i enjoyed this good luck to you in the contest
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Oh My Word~
Haikus are tricky for me but I Love to read them
This one flushes the flesh~ Powerful piece my Friend and what images You have brought forth~
The first line~ nails it right on the head-
no pun intended
Beautiful title too
I think my eyebrows are singed from the fire
Thank You for sharing Your Heat and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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I think you "nailed" this one Swan, very nicely done!
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aaaaaaaaah. Nice one, Swan. You always make me hot with your sensual words, love. Keep up that great work and good luck in the contest!
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Hee Hee!!! Good one here hon
good luck!!!
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YES...........!
oops that follows release.
Nice hot haiku!
Delila
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Nice work here bro!
I love the title to this one.
Good luck to you here!
Jeremy0826
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