rain against clear glass
muted colors blend and pass
outline morning sky
muted colors blend and pass
outline morning sky
hours softly flow
falling leaves now plastered flat
frame my canvas of glass
frame my canvas of glass
hours softly flow
Author notes
kurgle my picture
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A contest entry
- ♥ Haiku Mania ♥ by Freak-in-BlackJeans.
800 points, ended December 16, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Serene & Tranquil...
Got a real feeling of inner peace from your words here...
Another fantastic piece that didn't fail to make me feel and I love poetry that makes me feel, regardless of genre...
Well done!!!
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Beautiful!! I feel like I keep repeating myself with all the praises on each of your poems I read, but they each deserve the the applause and more.
Think you may have misspelled "canvas" in the last line.
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fixed it thanks for your lind words
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. A great haiku. Best of luck in the contest.
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thanks for your kind words
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I liked this alot !!
your flow was so smooth, your imagery reflects the picture perfect!
thank you for sharing
Rend
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Namaste
thank you
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