a w a y
in a manger
Wise men spot a stranger
Dressing the angels in tight party frocks of - deceit
A contest entry
- Quatrain Word Bank - 4 Lines of Christmas by Judith Chandler.
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mary mother of god!
you set it out good although i have to say the line (away in gthe manger) is already taken in a song about christmas lol(
well done and sorry you didnt win anything
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mary mother of god!
you set it out good although i have to say the line (away in gthe manger) is already taken in a song about christmas lol( well done and sorry you didnt win anything -
I like this modern sort of form. What is deciet?
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Deceit...deceiving somebody, abusing their trust.
thanks for your kind words x
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Interesting!
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So cute
I see that we did use the same rhyme in this, yours is very creative and we also used the same backgroung are you me or am I you Hey good luck in the contest!!!
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loved it lol although i dnt think anyone other than people who are english will get frock ! lolz
i loved this your really put an interesting spin on it
well done
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