There was a young girl
being bailed
who had one friend
who begged for money
until the third year
You raise me up
so i can stand on maintains
you raise me up
on the Stone seas
i am strong when i am on your shoulders
you raise me up
to more that i can be
this girl name was Becky
in our science class
sh sat next to me
and we started to talk
You raise me up
so i can stand on maintains
you raise me up
on the Stone seas
i am strong when i am on your shoulders
you raise me up
to more that i can be
we got a load in common
and i deserted my other Friend
now i think I'm a bully
but who cares
You raise me up
so i can stand on maintains
you raise me up
on the Stone seas
i am strong when i am on your shoulders
you raise me up
to more that i can be
A contest entry
- Liar (s) by CarolDesjarlais.
900 points, ended November 30, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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there are so many errors in this poem...but once thing for sure, you must give credit to Josh Groban. Even the Title has an error. Be really careful not to plagarize, at all....you could have hinted at the song...I would have known it.
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