i cringe
a look at this gap
lost in a point at this map
a bridge
nothing to to do
but walk
no soul to talk
and all i want is you
Author notes
Option: Picture #1
A contest entry
- Word Prompt Quickie by Polaja.
1200 points, ended November 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lots of options by wakawaka05.
3650 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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I like this one. A lot.
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What a great write. It is beautifully written and has lovely flow. Thank you for entering my contest. Best of luck in the contest and in future writing.
Caity
>wakawaka<
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aww. this is really sweet. i love the imagery your words created. keep penning.
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This has an interesting rhyme to it
I like that it adds structure to the confused tone of the poem - the take on the prompt was good too!
Thank you for entering
Polly
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thank you
i really appreciate your feedback
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I love it. Its a beautiful peice of work. Well Done
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