From blind adoration
to hate
From near-worship
to despair
Blind woman walking
Deaf woman listening
Tender soul rendered
dead inside
Trusting heart savaged
Dead with grief
Mad murderer responsible. . .
Little words
A contest entry
- Liar (s) by CarolDesjarlais.
900 points, ended November 30, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think, but kindly, please.
Comments
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Oh, I like it! I like it! I like it!
Few words and whole world of madnesses in between.
"Blind woman walking
Deaf woman listening"
This is just awesome! -
I love the visual contrast/conflict tone of these few words that paint such heavy notes upon this page...well said! Good luck in the contest
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What a terrific write... I love what you've come up with and penned here... How often are we hurt beyond redemption by little words...
Bravo.
Ken
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From blind adoration
to hate
From near worship
to despair
Emotions can be manipulated so easily and quickly
A very good write you hav penned here
I can relate to it
All the very best In the contest
Be Well
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I wish I didn't get this but I do!
Great!
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