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Howling winds bring trembling cold,

pages turn

repeating word for word,

the last time I felt this way.

I'm giving up things like hats and shoes,

I know someday soon,

this will need repeating too,

but for now,

I'll sit this one out,

and just stay in from the cold.

Author notes

I think it's prompt one, but I have no idea where this came from, so I'll just let you decide.
Love,
Jin

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Thank you Jin
    A loved the out of the box feel you gave with this wonderful poem hun
    Though provoking
    Best wishes sis
    Love Julie x


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008

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    kind of an interesting poem that you have written here, not really like your other, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest