Walk free standing
Into nothing but a trance.
A heart beat of fake views,
yet these eyes are wide open.
I’m awake.
I ‘m still living, breathing…
It all comes smacking in my face, wide awake I feel.
If I was to sleep for endless days I would still feel this.
Author notes
So yeah you need sleep, yet you feel awake cause of all that the world keeps smacking in your face, or just emotions and feelings that come smacking you in the face, kinda thing...
A contest entry
- lack of sleep by written-in-ink.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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i love the syntax
it was very nice
and this was an amazing poem
thank you and good luck -
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Thank you (:
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brillent
so ture well done love it
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