Rehabilitate
My Needing Sodden Pussy
Feast On My Dessert
Author notes
The picture used with this write I do not claim as my own. Pictue found on google images.
A contest entry
- Make Me Clinch My Face With A Deeply Sensual Haiku by theredcatjazzoflove.
800 points, ended November 30, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - H...is for Haiku by DogFish.
600 points, ended December 13, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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DAMN, THAT PIC AND HAIKY is HOT, HOT, HOT and TRULY HIT THE SPOT, TODAY!
Feast On My Dessert
Now. that's what I call a juicy, creamy, and scrumptious HOT CHOCOLATE & PINK Dessert, Baby! Mind if this naughty boy has a second piece of that DARK CHOCOLATE CREAM PIE? I'm a hungry man who needs a tasty treat so sensual and sweet to keep me tallywhacker standing proud and tall - and that ain't all MISS HOT CHOCKLAT.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Aw, hell, ya'll... Somebody get me my bandana-
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Ay Caramba !
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Excellent. Cant really say anything else about this piece, as it's all there on the page.
Good write.
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Oh Yeah!!!
Congrats on your gold hon!!! This is a very delicious haiku!!!!
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Now where's that licking lips icon when you really need it?
A wonderfully tempting write...
Well done...
Ken
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I'd love to feast. It's a very good offer.
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Wow!
Oh man this is so hot. What a fantastic haiku. Best of luck in the contest.
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omfg! this is sexy shit oooooooooooooh wooooooo yes indeed goodness this was smoking slamming i enjoyed this a whole lot good luck in the contest
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Holy Mother of Pearl Jam~
Oy!! You do Haiku too
You just go on with Your Hot self
My eyes are singed
I get all tongue tied when I try to Haiku
also I sneeze~
Keep that quill dancing~
Woot!
Love this!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heat and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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tempting to a person with an overpowering sweet tooth as i have, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Damn! This is Hot, so much said in so few words
Good luck in the contest
~sugar~
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just in time for Thanksgiving
mmm desert
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Wonderful, your writes are always a dessert, but I doubt yours is sodden.
Best wishes in the contest
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WOW
damn..so dinner's not an option huh? ..ok!!
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I'll be right over! lmao
Great work here and I love your background dear.
Jeremy0826
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