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Cherry Red.

i tasted bliss
  asphyxiating a moan from her lips.
  the necktie she wore
  told me she wanted to be choked.
  nightmare reincarnate.
 
  i could see her writhing
  in black sheet convulsions,
  shiny with satin, silk with blood.
  i etched her scream in bone-shivers
  notches in my bedpost.
 
  i knew her wrists
  were good for breaking
 
  and her hair was screaming,
  strawberry scented and
  caught in the glitter of her lipgloss,
  begging to be pulled.
 
  i want you.

High heeled high class,
Just a beggar after all
I knew
Her skin was ment the taste of leather
She's only clad in lace for so long
 
Cherry lipstick smeared now
She tastes like nails in my back.
 
Digging
 
Deeper.
 
She's screaming like the ropes holding her down
Candycane flavered
Cottencandy sweet
 
I knew her spirit was for the taking
[break me.]
 
The chain belt, 
Dangling off her hips
Ment she was good for binding
 
That her ankles were ment to be bruised
 
I want you. [too]

she quivered beneath eyelashes
  of bloodied rain
  spiraling in hisses
  give-it-to-me. give-it-to-me.
 
  i licked her lips
  wet with thirst,
  the sticky juice of cherries
  massacred by broken glass teeth
  and the black serpent
  writhed inside her ribs
  poisoning sweet kisses.
 
  her neck bent like a dove's,
  and it confessed temptation,
  pleading for me
  to wring it
  in the name of sin
  and lust.
 
  her name felt dirty
  as a razor,
  but i couldn't stop
  gasping it.

The scent of dried blood like perfume
Clung to bitten lips
And the barbell  in a tounge well used
Her touch was like acid
Tripping into euphoria
Skin like rose petals
Beaten strawberry pink
From deisre and sweat
 
She panted in a serpents breath
P l e a s e
And she felt gritty
Like sugar tasted from the tip of an ear
And hot like summer.
 
Velvet hands bound to shame
Pleaded in  w a n t
Eternatiy in a kiss
 
And her hips
Like perfection
 
She was
A mouthful of poison
Knowing just when to scream her painful exstacy
 
"bleed for me," she whipsered in tones of a razors edge
 
She was sin
That I couldn't bear without.
Her name the prayer I voiced
 
[cherry red] 

glistening.
  the inside of her thighs licked of fire,
  burnt my fingertips.
  and she was lay poised
  like an angel with raven-tipped wings
  heaven ravaged/corrupted
  by hell's divine flames.
  i was bound to her
  both by obsession
  and the ropes knotted our wrists
  in martrimony
  her back arched into a startled question
  as if she was looking for her wings..
  will you take me?
 
  i asked forgiveness
  deep within you,
  incinerating a dripping wet whisper;
  found repentence in snakebites
  lashes as a whip in the tender flesh
  behind my knees.
 
  her teeth tied a red ribbon of tongues
  around my neck,
  my collar that her stuttering heart
  urged tighter
  speaking a tortured vow
  of pleasure
  and the whimpers
  of sex in my throat.
 
  strangle me
  as the hunger inside you

Eyes like opiates,
Inhale.
Now breathe a whisper
Wanton into her ear
When my voice is her desire
 
Tender skin kissed by candlewax in the dusk
Sweet thighs parted 
Glistening in you.
 
Chambers filled with something molten
When a kiss can cause spontaneous combustion
Convulsion
You're my favorite disaster.
 
Grasping silken hair
Sliding away in satin sheets
Dampened with us.
 
Open eyes say
That the sun is rising
 
Wide awake, it's morning...
 
Cherry red skies.

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  • I must have forgot to add that this is a collaboration between me and a good friend(KLP).


  • My Souls Reflection gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Double WOW!! I have to admit that this isn't the type of erotica that I would normally read but you did a great job here. I was certainly swept up in the image you created.

    Thanks for entering!

    Annie


  • SageoMithas
    November 26, 2008

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    WOW

    So, that was a roller coaster ride. I saw the amount of lines and decided that if you put the time in to write it, I should read it. There is quite a bit of wonder in this piece, bondage, domination, and a bit of a mind f*ck. I can honestly say you had me drop jawed from the middle to the ending. Very vivid descriptions, I am impressed.

    My favorite line of the piece is this "incinerating a dripping wet whisper". I'm not sure why, but I love it. You have done a great job here.