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awaiting

wet kisses travel
tingling along trembling thighs
wide open for love

A contest entry

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  • mcfreeman
    January 23
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    hard ku

  • celadia
    November 27, 2008

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    this really says it, I'm surprised you didn't win anything, they must have had some superior haiku to have missed this one.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    yes indeed i so love this you did a very great smoking job with this piece here it was a pleasure i enjoyed good luck in the contest


  • usefuldistraction
    November 25, 2008
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    Whew, quite an afternoon here! Amazing piece!

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