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The Truth

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“Swirling visions going round and round
through my mind as the earth spins
time changes from the here and now
to a time that only I need to know”

come see this master piece
this land of enchantment
it is here for you and you alone
feel the peace that it instills
here you can find what you seek
the answers that you have longed to hear
but only if you open your mind
and within your heart…accept it
for these things are many
dates, times and places
people of all race and color
centuries of secrets…forgotten
you must open up
let it flow in, I promise you will not sink
within the depths of knowledge that you seek
the knowledge that you have always known
but chose to forget
time is drawing to a close
the more you push it aside
let your body fill with peace
and it is then that you will come to know
the truth

~Tisha Rene~

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Merced River, photo by Randy Walton – fredmiranda.com

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  • NeptunesMight
    November 30, 2008

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    good poem imagery reminded me of my time in WA. i can remember a few times when i got home sick i actualy went exploring down a river that sorta resembles the picture at the top
    Jack


  • NyteShade
    November 27, 2008
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    This is very beautifully written and full of hope.
    Love the flow of this piece.
    Well done


  • Olivias Violin
    November 26, 2008

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    "come see this master piece
    this land of enchantment
    it is here for you and you alone
    feel the peace that it instills
    here you can find what you seek
    the answers that you have longed to hear
    but only if you open your mind
    and within your heart…accept it"

    - this is my favorite part


  • bird-mad girl
    November 25, 2008

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    This was a very insightful piece. I always feel a form of comfort whenever I read your words. Something about them just sooths me, like a lullaby.

    This was a gorgeous piece. It flowed like a river and the words flooded me.