rubbing hot bodies
warm moisture comes between them
ecstasy erupts
Author notes
Paloszoo
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v52/juicypink/Making-love.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- Make Me Clinch My Face With A Deeply Sensual Haiku by theredcatjazzoflove.
800 points, ended November 30, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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now that's hot!


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oh I do like this!!
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vivid imagery. well done!
♥ Kathraina -
hehe, you're sooooo... bad! This is a perfect Senryu but I'm telling your mother!

Love,
Amera♥

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OMFG! this is so damn sexy and exactly what i was craving yummy i so love this you really did a very great excellent job with this good luck to you in the contest
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oohh!! that's hot!! this is really erotic and what a great photo. good luck in contest.


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Very hot and sensual words here!
I love the photo you found. Well done
and all the best to you with this one!
Jeremy0826 -
mmmm...
very heated..

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