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In the closed dead minds

Amid concrete jungle bridges wrought
Leaving humanity to bleed
While we watch it dying from the other side
Where hearts of stone breathe decayed emotions
In the closed dead minds

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 26, 2008

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    This is an interesting take on the prompt the imagery is desolate and so is the atmosphere that you have created - well done!

    Thank you for entering

    Polly


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 25, 2008

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    behind painted glass we watch our own world decay to something a dark shade of gray, just something i just thought of, think i need to work on it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest.