Potpourri explodes as synaptic responses,
firework networks of colors into my senses,
sprouting gardens of hues, enlivening creativity,
bringing beauty alive, giving it a presence of its' own.
Capturing stirring minds,
guiding to a point of serene exploration;
into one's inner potential,
causing it to bloom into a fragrant masterpiece.
Author notes
www.christeas.com/abstract_art_masterpiece_b.jpg
50 words of less
A contest entry
- Contest for Vocabulary Groups - by Bear by Arkbear.
650 points, ended December 1, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. This is amazing. I love it, love it, love it. The imagery was so vivid. Well done. Congratulations on the HM.
Much love
Ylova
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Lovely wording and images! I enjoyed this - loved the image of the potpourri exploding into a fragrant masterpiece!
best wishes in the contest.
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Very vivid
What a great exploration of your chosen prompt... I love the "fragrant masterpiece" combining the senses... Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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Hello
I would not add a comma after*explodes*...1st L -
*of it own.*....( its' )
Using quite similiar words...ie;...potpourri....colors....hues.....beauty..................do tend to take away from the last visual, and lasting impression with each thought is crucial.....therefore, bring me more than ( 1 ) thought with each L......as each word I have mentioned tends to make me stay....still......movement is vital to a beautiful write such as tihs
Nice job....thank you so much for coming out to support your Group Contest....God bless you & good luck!
Bear ~
PS...Your last S* rocks....gorgeous choice of grammar......indeed a piece of beauty you have penned ~
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your first stanza is very vividly done..I really like your choice of words..almost if you translate the image into words...letterial..your second stanza counter-balance the first.."serene exploiration" well done! Good luck in de contest
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