this deep snowy night
hot flaming passions arise
snow angel melt me
A contest entry
- Make Me Clinch My Face With A Deeply Sensual Haiku by theredcatjazzoflove.
800 points, ended November 30, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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aw...this is beautiful...love the metaphors in this haiku...lovely
good luck
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I wanted to get the line in
"snow angel is no angel" but the form limits. Oh well. Thanks. -
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lol
that is cute. would have given it a bit of a humorous touch. hm...but i still like the "snow angel melts me"
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nice i like this the whole snow theme i think you did a very great job on this poem good luck in the contest do me a favor a be certain its 5.7.5 ok
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Yes pretty kitty.
Sometimes I write with a pause (paws) as a syllable. I put in a word for you. De tails. At least you didn't have kittens over it.
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