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Sounding it out

If I could hide away forever, I might...
behind the husky voices covering my thoughts

I would sink deeper into a dark warm place
where my vocal chords remain out of reach

I'd know no speech and never utter a wrong

But when sickness finds saliva scratching down the throat,
ears that don't hear can still feel the itch...

And for all that love's calling out for,
I cough up the human from within

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  • Mezclita
    December 14, 2008
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    Sure Julie!! And thank you for taking the time to prompt us, read and comment on my piece ^^ Darker? lol... it's about not shying away from life~

    Great hearing back from you. Do hope things are going well, Sis <3<3


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Wow my wonderful Sister
    Thank you for your wonderful and some what darker write
    Especially the second from last line
    Thank you for taking time for me
    Much love Julie x