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The Demon Has Fallen

I think I broke every bone in my body,
It hurts so much,
I think my equilbrium is fucked up.

                                                                         I walked away from you,
                                                                        Standing in the door,
                                                                        With your blue eyes,
                                                                        Where I think a part of me,
                                                                         Is still trapped.

                                                                       I never thought a face,
                                                                      Could take my mind away,
                                                                      Or that a smile,
                                                                      Could make my heart beat any louder.

I barely could breath,
Laying there next to you,
And I couldn't sleep,
Even though my body screamed,
The wonder left my eyes so full,
I couldn't close them shut.

And when you touched me,
You told me you existed,
And that I did too,

The emotions are consuming me,

Shaking the very core of me,

I have never felt this kind of fear.

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  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    Wow!; Like a tornado is going to hit; whoops, it already did! This is very well crafted and your descriptions of the way love affects your body and the ability to sleep are just so REAL! A very good write!