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Fire and Ice

How can it be
that you and I are so different
yet so very similar.

It is true I guess
that opposites do attract.

However, in our case
I think it could cause
us some problems.

After all,
a kiss from you
could melt me.

And a kiss from me
could put out your flame.

So what can we do
but continue on
loving each other from afar.

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  • Heart Sutra
    December 1, 2008

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    There has been a lot of "melting" in this contest. I think I have seen the word "melt" more than the word "fire." That said, I think you have shared some lovely images in this poem that are often true and painful for all of their love.