Smooth and delicious
oozing erotically
so sweet, luscious mound
Author notes
Erotic Haiku
Background by TheRedCatJazzOfLove
In a list
A contest entry
- Make Me Clinch My Face With A Deeply Sensual Haiku by theredcatjazzoflove.
800 points, ended November 30, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and applause on my work. However, please be sure not to use my name in your comments. I appreciate it!
Comments
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Very sexy!!!!
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This is really a "W-O-W ! And so with the background.
An enticingly, delicious write to read.
Good luck in this contest.
summer51
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Luscious indeed!!!! Fabulous haiku with delicious imagery. Love the border. Adds a lot. Good luck in the contest!!
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A wonderfully sensual Haiku
always a pleasure
best of luck with the contest
~sugar~
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Well written thoughts, best of luck to you in this one my friend
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I think you accomplished what she was looking for...lol 
Good luck
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i like the simplicity of a haiku, and respect that they are hard to do, that is one of the reason i like this one, keep it flowing
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its hot honey up in here its smoking i really do like the threat you brought to the table good luck in the contest dear
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mmmmm.....This is a teaser here! I love it hon
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