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Here lies a girl...

Here lies a girl so blessed,
Who has dreams that are higher than the sky,
Who wants to challenge the world,
Who will one day conquer death itself,
Only to be snared away like a thief in the night.

Here lies a girl so loved,
Who has family who still adores,
Who has friends who still believe,
Who has enemies who still respect,
And she will always be remembered.

No!

No girl lies here
Just an empty shell.

For the girl still lives on in the people's heart
For the girl has conquered death itself
For as long as people remember,
Death shall hold no chains over this girl.

Yes!

She lives.

Eventhough she has passed on,
Her spirit shall still live on.

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  • Danny Beatty gold member
    January 5

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    very moving and well done. I enjoyed the format and the flow and the thoughts are powerful and significant ...

    thank you for this fine entry inthe contest