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Runaway Granddaughter

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“Once a runner, always a runner,” they said.

I remembered her first wobble;
reaching beyond sharp corners
to plush of a sofa seat
where I was waiting,
arms out and ready
to catch her.

I cannot grab her to me, now,
when streets have high walled alleys
I can not get over.

Promises, skittering about in dark places,
skritching and scratching out shadowy reasons
a garbage bin full of old bouquets is more home.

She cracked her head
one too many times, so she believes
her shadow does not follow her.

Darn, if she isn’t wobbling yet!



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  • penman gold member
    December 5, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Abe 1
    November 30, 2008

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    lik it ya shown ere with dis poem
    out side of de box
    gt luck 2 ya
    cheers abe


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Sighhh...When they get tired of bangin' their heads against the walls, they know whose arms will catch 'em. Beautiful, my Friend.


  • moon2u
    November 25, 2008

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    Oh I like this one...

    yes, we are born with our apparent nature
    I believe that!
    some of us always having to learn the hard way

    that our shadows DO follow us

    applause and good luck