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Mirrors

The Mirror stood there,
My reflection staring back.
Doubting myself,
I lovingly finding everything wrong
Making it all the more painful
Looking in the mirror,
        I hit it!
Shattered for the rest of time!

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  • Ryno
    December 8, 2008

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    This was a pretty cool metaphor - shattering being the equivalent of suicide. I thought you could've used some stronger phrasing to make the brevity more powerful though.

    Thanks for the entry.